This initial demo is only a few minutes long but you've really hooked me. Your dialogue is really charming and.. idk how to describe it. The use of analogy to talk about and explore adult heavy themes and it being a very intentional writing/stylistic choice is just. good. adding emotional flavor and texture as opposed to obfuscation. it's just really appealing. And extremely curious to see what's up with that apple and where this story goes. ^_^
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i loved this demo! really excited for your future work :D
This initial demo is only a few minutes long but you've really hooked me. Your dialogue is really charming and.. idk how to describe it. The use of analogy to talk about and explore adult heavy themes and it being a very intentional writing/stylistic choice is just. good. adding emotional flavor and texture as opposed to obfuscation. it's just really appealing. And extremely curious to see what's up with that apple and where this story goes. ^_^
thank youuu
i hope to get chapter 1 out at least during early may but we'll see